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Thank you for the suggestions, but i have to disagree on your thinking of using the word "depraved". I think darkness can be depraved. The world itself has put this ...

I like it.

i love it and it goes together perfectly

I love it I think its perfect . I love this line "so cock your guns and clean your barrels. Fire and ice can’t exist together,"

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Awesome i love it

Its a beautiful poem I love this lines "She carefully puts on her makeup, and thinks of the lies she'll say. Im fine thank you, echos in her mind," You ...

Wow, its amazing I love it. I don't see anything you need to change. It's awesome!

This poems great I love this part the best, Oh, how I long for your never ending warmth. Your arms encircling my cold, aching body.

I really love this its very beautiful.

I really like it. It really expresses alot.

I like it, i really like the way it sound when read out loud to.

I love the poem, i really like how you ended it.